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Strongly hope the history in future in can't appear a circumstance like this:Regard as an article because when the text problem is criticized the summer Jia reason keeps spirit strong the ground declare:"What I write is a gruel science fiction!"
Two, originally criticize to the text of《Carmen 》
The science fiction is a novel, so the work examined to have nothing good to report from the text angle don't necessarily isn't a good novel."Gruel science fiction" can be an excellent piece as well as be a Yong to make.The former is like 《close the bottle of demon 》 , the latter is like 《Carmen 》 .This be decided by author and they of conceive outline and create.《Pass 》 is used a Han Tai can the demon image of Ju guided the development of story, physics the tycoons were like on-line pearl of gold similar be established, Yi Yi what to livings Hui is a their conviction for science, the whole story is delightfully fresh and flowing freely, describe wit and vivid, although nothing important big structure and form, absolutely is an exquisite article.If in consideration of"science fiction nursery tale" has already had it but to the nursery tale factor in the 《pass 》 more tolerate of words, have no again bring it into the fight for text.But 《Carmen 》 after a year, but make me consumedly disappoint.
The work didn't pursue what thought depth;This doesn't hope completely inexperienced in society author just to ascend a direction for becoming real expert to rush.But the author wants to express of the vitality, rhyme of Carmen to seeming to be very pale in the work, perhaps to summer Jia this is the biggest failure.The headline " Carmen" and beginning is a fabulous concerning the interstellar of Carmen, with Carmen in the novel this person's thing appears to be unveiled to form fresh clear contrast, I guess all of a sudden to conclude tail, hence surmise to hang the fun for reading in the reading have no.The 《close the bottle of demon 》 advantage isn't lies in hanging to read, but end that"Archimedes' burden" make people hold the belly and be rated as perfect Xie Mu Li's flower.And in the middle of 《Carmen 》 these two personal things are all very monotonous, the structure is also a program to turn very much.Carmen is a looks not astonishing but the body have a difference to grasp, "I" am Narrator, the observer, finder of Carmen.The fluxion of story is nothing exciting:The class came calls Carmen of girl, everyone discovers that she isn't the dance-hostess of that legendary magic, apathy she.Only"I" keep in mind a kind of conviction of adherence and become a friend with Carmen, and discover her that ordinary outward appearance to descend real soul of Carmen gradually, then ……not reader's idea anticipates,****Part we saw Carmen at relieve day with frightened of dancing and admitting defeat numerous audiences, "she fell flop later on", the last melancholy and sad but beautiful final outcome.In regard to writing, lost to 《pass 》 medium of tactful humor, there is also no Jing sentence witty remark, return calculate the fluency is just.Only this and no more just.
What about problem's where?One is a novel have never made a show of the " Carmen"'s growing the person's place in culture in the world is most attracted to the classic image within gallery, positive such as the summer Jia is in the postscript say, Carmen of charming, lie in hers "exceedingly fascinating and charming""****Is unruly"and to the passion of the song and dance and the freedom.Surprised sky of one dance that relieves a day, not only too weak on details, and the pen and ink is also slightly more or less mild, although is huge anti- to differ but results in with crafty pimp's image just appearing astonishing effect, but this is far not enough to explain "exceedingly fascinating and charming""****Is unruly".Emit drive guardian of a minor the harsh dangerous dancing of Sir Na Wa Luo, this is certainly brave behavior that fights for a freedom, is to various before now inhibit of emollient resist, but why actually Sir Na Wa Luo sternly put in the custody of to her, and then forbade her to dance, the novel not and definitely handed over to treat.In fact this antinomies are exactly the colourful place is probably:Na tile Luo is what identity, according to what kind of the emotion play the image of this strict father, Carmen again is why be like an ugly duckling in the crowd, two each other has what viewpoint ……here to launching of antinomy and narrate in, Carmen pursues freedom, free unruly personality with resist spirit then can fresh get up clearly.Set Carmen personality for silent introverted few talk little language, but describe and limit an angle of view to carry on by first person, unavoidably make people feel that the novel still stays around shallow form to the quest of Carmen personality-whether can from here think that the author still becomes more superficial to the comprehension of human nature?The second, describe surely mild, but postscript confessedly clearly show the author just lift a writing after being impressed with by the art image of Carmen.This words that can not help making me think of Goethe:"I once grasped a kind of classic state of mind, can not forget up to now, this is my annoyance."Literature work, the feeling is moved to win but Be delivered to an outside, naturally good;But can the faithful earth's surface reach oneself's heart of touched, this is the test to the author art capability.I ever and all night listenned to music play Notre Dame de Paris, the whole mind and body sank to immerse in the persons, such as Esmeralda and Gringoire...etc.'s soft and charming singing, but made me write one at the moment to analyze an article and perhaps and rather wrote at that time to get deep.Push F and person, at be subjected to novel, satge play and movie concerning Carmen touched with novel creations of, the mindset of summer Jia seems to be also to have 1 from arouse more arrive opposite equanimity of development.How experienced text is well express "ever of touched", then took in to deepen, this is summer, Jia and many authors of"idea the interest is a text" face of a problem.Finally, novel some details still owe to chisel and carve.BE such an in text:
"If this lets your Ying, " she always says, "I invite you to eat the Earth taste chocolate pancake that I personally roast, -" she strange mold strange kind ground make one drool of facial expression.(2005 Issue 8 in 《science fiction world 》 , page 9)
This"-" and"strange mold strange kind", "the facial expression drooled" seems to be inharmonious with the language,cheap dr dre beats, behavior style of Carmen in the whole novel and pour is like that "I" even am a summer Jia, I pop out come more the Zu acted in another's placed.The grain of novel clearly wants to let Carmen evolves in the savings strength in the story by dark melancholy personality and generally blooms in the turning point,such as Tan flower, , this detail beyond doubt interference this kind of"Xu power".One flaw in writing.Again such as:
"Sir Na Wa Luo went to immigration office office, would not° until morrow come back."She in a serious manner declares that" Carmen prepares to roast small pancake of chocolate and milk pudding at home, don't know to have who would like to come?"(Page 9)
Say this words to be inviting "I", but past make the "in all seriousness" carriage a little bit makes to smile, but this unwillingly can accept.However, only led a few natural segments, and then appeared sentence like this:
"I just think that" I in a serious manner declare, "a one and only wonderful afternoon!I with the whole month city the one and only of the Carmen young lady sit the floor at her house last compotation afternoon tea, how honor!"(Page 9)
Similarly use to depend on sparse likeness in phrase and words, the personality of person took place here mixed, is also the minor faults in the novel.
The artistic talent literary grace of summer Jia, already in 《the bottle of pass demon 》 get thoroughly of display;But other some of her poem texts, and and her contact, let me feel the writer that she is promise well to become an excellent science fiction.But since the novel with no progress to even appear to fall back an evidence of the article " Carmen" saw, she to 《pass demon of bottle 》 success where, own creations should go toward what direction the development didn't wide awake correct understanding.So-called"gruel science fiction", it is a problem to have no new meaning on the science fiction essence, if connect is novel art all not worth mentioning, those were really some prospects to all have no.Probably want to carry out a mountain to compare more one mountain in the literature creations Gao of the line progress
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